✨perfectly maybe✨

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Cover: 8/10 I like the photo you used for the cover but the black and white killed the vibe for a romance novel.

Explanations/descriptions: 9/10 your explanation is, amazing but your description is ok, but not well described, try to describe where they, like when they walked into the  office building.

We both stormed into the large white office complex , with both of us wearing coffee on our white shirts.

Grammar, punctuations, spelling. 10/10 very good you don't have any grammatical errors of any sort.

Blurb/short story description: 9/10 your description is a little short but it's still amazing, I hope you can make it longer.

Readers enjoyment:10/10 very very funny book, I love it and I enjoy it.

Overall score: 46/50%

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