Cover:9/10 your cover is absolutely amazing, but scares me a bit, but i won't blame you it's a paranormal, but is a little plain.
Descriptions/explanations: 10/10 I don't what to say you are very very good, in that area, I can picture that black dress and that necklace, I can even picture Lyla, already. I think you can describe better than even me!.
Blurb/short story description: 10/10 your blurb, is awesome and makes me itch for more, I will surely, continue reading your books, I hate paranormal, but I love this one.
Grammar, spelling and punctuation 10/10:in your a/n you said something about grammatical error trust me don't worry you don't have any, and your use of punctuation is just top notch .
Readers enjoyment :10/10 there is never a dull moment with Lyla or the king, I always seem to enjoy this book during a bad or good moment, I still enjoy it .
Overall score: 59/60%.
Check out how a king falls, by X_always_dreaming_x
it's amazing, trust me you'll love it
YOU ARE READING
ⓗⓞⓣ ⓟⓘⓝⓚ ⓡⓔⓥⓘⓔⓦⓢ|hiatus
Randomwant feed back on your book? want to know if you're a good writer?. want to know how good you are at writing? look no further, come on down to "hot pink reviews" doja cat fans.
