Cover:10/10 , I love your cover, black and white covers are normally doll, but yours is bright and dark at the same time,.
Description/explaining.9/10 your explanations are very good how you describe the facial expressions are also good, but you don't describe places well
Example, when she had that flashback.
I lied down on my king size bed, tossed my duvet to side, and suddenly I had a flashback, I was 7 then, I was in a playground with my friend Betty, the grass was greener than ever and sun was shining brightly, we were over playing at the carousels, when I lost track of time.
Grammar, spelling and punctuation: 9/10 your punctuation is very good, and your spelling, but there are a few typing errors, but there's nothing a little editing can't do ❤ .
Blurb/Short story description: 10/10 your description is very entertaining, I could read it over and over again, and not get bored.
Readers enjoyment 10/10 I enjoy every thunder moment, I never seem to get bored it's just always interesting for me.
Overall score. 58/60%
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