Cover: 10/10 absolutely beautiful, it's very eye catching.
Description/explanations 9/10: just like the others you describe facial expressions, but not the place she went to or what it looks like, for example, when she pulled up in front of school.
My dad stopped the, car and parked in the parking lot, I stood up got out of the car and looked at the White and Brown huge story building with students, walking in the doors, I took a deep breath strapped my backpack to my back and walked in.
Blurb/short story description 10/10: I for one love your story description, it doesn't give out much information, but it's still amazing.
Grammar ,Spelling, punctuations. 9/10 your grammar is amazing and so are your punctuations , but you have a few errors in the spellings.
Readers enjoyment 10/10 I enjoy the book a lot, even saying the title, over and over is enjoyable.
Overall score : 58/60%
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