Cover:10/10 I absolutely love your cover it's amazing , don't ever ever change it, it definitely looks bad ass.
Description/explanations: 10/10 your explanation is absolutely amazing, your description is also top notch, I could literally see the principals office in my head.
Blurb/short book description: 7/10. Your description is, a little short, and doesn't tell us much, about zyla, we're she leaves how she is example.
Zyla a 19 year old antisocial orphan, who lives with her foster mum, Natalie.
She was just a girl who wanted to know about her past, but it's too bitter for her to handle.
Find out if Zyla's past will hunt her or will she conquer her past on....... "Badass with a past".
Grammar, spelling and punctuations:10/10
Your, spellings are very good, and your punctuations are amazing and go with the sentences.
Readers enjoyment: 13/15.I enjoyed reading the book a lot, and it's very very funny. One question?, you said the girl is in college but your putting high school stuff, their like principal, in college it's chancellor, and it's not class room it's lecture hall, so change that!
Overall score: 50/60%
Check out badass with a past by Honeycoatedmellow.
It's a great book!
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