Book: Our definition of love
Written By: ishraddha
Judge: the_lost_stories
Title:9/10
Title is creative and goes with the story, as every character has its own definition of love.
Blurb: 10/10
Giving different definitions of love and prospective about love by every character was an creative idea. blurb is wonderfully written. And I personally loved that you have mentioned that the story is little similar to the movie.
Cover: 9/10
Very simple and attractive, goes with the story
Plot: 8/10
Plot is taken from the movie Mujhse dosti karogi
Character development:8.5/10
Nandini,Anurag and Prerna are the main characters and are described nicely.
Grammar: 7/10
There are some besic grammatical errors so the story needs proof reading and editing to check typos and punctuation error.
Flow: 8/10
Flow of the story is good. But when flashbacks are added there is little break in the story. It feels lose of connection of past and present.
Dialogues/expression: 8/10
Expressions are described in complete detail, but dialogues could have been more creative.
Creativity/originality: 8/10
Storyline is taken from the movie but it was creatively presented.
Overall: 8.5/10
Title is very beautiful and story is totally wonderful. I was totally hooked in the story and will recommed to read.
Total: 86/100
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Reviews by the_lost_stories (Shivangi)
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