Reviews by the_lost_stories (Shivangi)

Book: Game of betrayal

Book: Game of betrayal

Written By: AngelTweet

Judge: the_lost_stories 

Title: 10/10

Title is unique and very attractive. Completely goes with the story. 

Blurb: 10/10

Beautifully written. The quotes increases the urge to read the book. It catches the total attraction and conveys beautifully the meaning of betrayal.

Cover: 9/10

Very simple and attractive, goes with the story.

Plot: 9/10

Very interesting and unique plot

Character development: 9/10

Swara and Sanskar are the main characters of the story. Their behaviour and character is defined in detailed and all other characters are also defined wonderfully. 

Grammar: 8/10

No basic errors, proofreading will help to remove any minute grammatical error and punctuation.

Flow: 9.5/10

I did not feel any break in the flow, but you could have cut so much detailed description of each scene. To let the reader hooked up.

Dialogues/expression: 10/10

Expressions are defined neatly and I can totally relate to the characters of the story.1

Creativity/originality: 10/10

Totally original work and the story is presented in a total creative way.  The voiceover of destiny is unique and creative idea.

Overall: 9.5/10

Story is totally about the betrayal and betrayals. Thus Title and blurb of the story is totally apt and beautiful. The twist of destiny and its little voiceover is really creative. The plot is so good that it kept me hooked with the story. The blurb and storyline creates a curiosity to read it. 

Total: 94/100