Book: wry

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Book: wry

Written By Fe-en-Dios

Judge:the_lost_stories

Title: 10/10

Unique selection of the title, that does complete justice to the story.

Blurb: 8/10

Writer can give copyright disclaimers after the description of the story. So that it can attract the readers' attention.

Cover: 7/10

Goes with the story, but does not contain author’s name and title.

Plot: 10/10

Unique plot. Its the story of Arnav, a pianist marries Khushi who is 10yrs younger. Very creative storyline.

Character development: 10/10

Characters are described beautifully, the detailing of their looks, expression is perfect.

Grammar: 10/10

Commendable vocabulary. The writer has great command of the language.

Flow: 10/10

Flow of the story is just perfect. Every scene is described smoothly and story smoothly transits between the scenes.

Dialogues/expression: 10/10

Expressions are wonderfully presented. One can easily connect to the expressions of the characters.

Creativity/originality: 10/10

The story is very creatively presented.

Overall: 9/10

I was awestruck with the story, it beautifully presents the emotions and expressions of the characters. Your command on language is impressive. I would only suggest to-work on cover and blurb to make it 10/10.

Total: 94/100