Book: Olfaction

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Book: Olfaction

Written By Fe-en-Dios 

Judge: the_lost_stories 


Title: 10/10

Unique title, that completely matches the plot.

Blurb: 7/10

In my opinion, the writer should have described the story first, later could have given the copyright details. It should contain little more about the story to increase the curiosity.

Cover: 7/10

Title and author's name are missing from the cover. 

Plot: 9/10

Very unique and creative plot, that revolves around the painful past, broken hearts and above all love, painful circumstances and as the author connects everything ‘the Olfaction’.

Character development: 10/10

Characters are described and developed beautifully. I love the concept of describing characters with their individual fragrances.

Grammar: 10/10

Author has commendable hold of grammar. Vocabulary used is impressive. 

Flow: 9/10

Story flows smoothly, neither fast nor slow.

Dialogues/expression: 9/10

I would suggest, author can use more dialogues rather than descriptive tones, as it is more reachable.

Creativity/originality: 10/10

Very creative and original storyline. I just loved the idea of the story.

Overall: 9/10

It was a 5 star read as story kept me hooked up. Language used by an author is too impressive. Title of the story is very creative. I would only suggest if you could work with blurb and the cover to make it more attractive.

Total: 90/100

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