Book: Path by accident

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Book: Path by accident

Written By JescykaCharm

Judge: the_lost_stories

Title: 10/10

Title completely goes with the story line and it's unique and catchy.

Blurb: 7/10

Only simple introduction of characters. Blurb does not create an urge to read.

Cover: 8/10

Cover is too simple and the author can work to make it more creative.

Plot: 9/10

Love story starts after the accident. It's a unique and creative plot.

Character development: 9/10

All the characters are beautifully described and developed very nicely.

Grammar: 8/10

The writer has good command on grammar. But the story needs editing to reduce typos and punctuation errors.

Flow: 9/10

Flow of the story is smooth. But I would suggest the writer to update regularly to maintain the flow.

Dialogues/expression: 10/10

Expressions are beautifully presented. I totally feel connected with the characters.

Creativity/originality: 9/10

In my opinion, story is represented very creatively and originally.

Overall: 9/10

The story revolves around Collette, an aspiring artist and dancer And gynaecologist Sade. They met by an accident and the story takes an interesting turn. Story keeps me hooked but the writer needs to update regularly to keep the flow. 

Total: 88/100

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