Reviews by the_lost_stories (Shivangi)

Book: you are always in my heart

Book: you are always  in my heart 

Written By parishG7 

Judge: the_lost_stories

Title: 8/10

Title goes with the story, but needs more creativity.

Blurb: 6/10

Blurb only consists of simple introduction of characters.It misses the curiosity factor.

Cover: 8/10

Simple cover suits the story, but is not attractive.

Plot: 9/10

Unique plot based on army love story.

Character development: 8/10

Properly defined characters, but the writer needs to define characters more to connect the readers.

Grammar: 5/10

Story needs to be proof read and edited. Lots of grammatical errors and typos are there.

Flow: 9/10

Scenes are described pretty well and the story flows smoothly.

Dialogues/expression: 8/10

 More creativity needed to express the romance.

Creativity/originality: 8/10

Story seems original and unique. But writer needs more creativity to present it.

Overall: 7/10

Story is based on love story of army captain and army major’s daughter. Story is unique but to make it more attractive, creativity is needed. Author needs to work on blurb and the cover.

Total: 76/100