I always knew the start of this story was not very good. Well I still believe the idea is good but the way I delivered didn't match.
So, A few days ago I checked back on some of the first chapters for some info and... It's so much worse than I remember.
I'll be majorly editing it. So, yeah, no more chapters for now. I'll be leaving up what's here for now and take it down later. Or I may focus on the new improved version and keep this up and just not add anything to it anymore (just to look back and cringe at).
But what's for sure is that I'm going to fix this story. There will probably be some small (or maybe some major) changes to make the story flow better, help with character development and just remove any questions and confusion you would have had from reading this version.
It will be a separate book just in case I decide to keep this up. The name will be that same... Or at least very similar. I'll add something to the of this when the new one comes out so they won't get mixed up.
I decided that this is the best course of action for my story. I want to make it better so that's what I'm going to do.
I hope I will improve this story to the best of my ability and won't look back on it and cringe in a year or two.
YOU ARE READING
Not Just Your Average Human
FantasyDISCONTINUED! I have improved upon the story and made it a new book. It's called "Not Your Average Human". If you were interested in this please go check out that one instead as this is the old version I left up for lols and looking back and cringi...