Okay, so I need major help. I am in the middle of writing the scene where Sirius is supposed to die. Well, that isn't going to happen as he is a love interest. However, as I'm writing the scene it seems to be reading to make belief, even for being in a world of magic. So what I need are some ideas. So the first five people to comment will get sent a copy of the scene for their opinion.
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The Twice Blessed Child
FanfictionMy name is Anastasia Nicole. I don't know what my last name is. I don't know who my parents are. I don't know if I have a family. What is do know is that I live with Harry Potter and his Aunt and Uncle and cousin. I have magical powers, and a few ot...
