Departure

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I will change some of the dialogue

Jade: We actually pulled it off
Dmitry: Wow
Harvey: Well I have to admit, you played your parts well
Hatchet: We couldn't have done it without you guys
Harvey, how long until you can get it fenced?
Jade: We don't have long until The Broker figures out that we betrayed them
We need to move this and disappear fast
Harvey: You don't need to worry about The Broker
Hatchet: No going back...
Jade: What are you talking about?
Harvey: The Broker isn't real
Harvey and Hatchet: *Shoots Jade and Dimitry*

Flashback before Prelude

Harvey: It's almost time
Hatchet: Did both of them show up?
Harvey: Yep, got in a few minutes ago
The message is set up, ready to play
Hatchet: Things are gonna get bad in there if they see through the con
Harvey: They won't. You know the plan
Play your part and I'll play mine
They'll trust us
Hatchet: Are you sure about this?

Flasback ends

Harvey: I warned you not to get attached
Hatchet: Do you think that'll be us someday?
Harvey: No. Not me *holds Hatchet at gun point*
Hatchet: *Disarms Harvey*

Harvey: Well... that hurts
For what it's worth you were a great partner
Hatchet: I was a great mark too, apparently
Harvey: Don't take it personally
I taught you everything you know
We don't have to end it like this
Hatchet: You're the one who said don't hesitate to pull the trigger
Harvey: You can't fence the gold without me
Are you really going to walk away from twenty million?
Hatchet: *Shoots Harvey* I understand why Harvey betrayed me it's who he was
That was the day I became a freelancer
It was my departure
The day I set out to find a better path
I know I lost twenty million
But I'd like to think I traded it for one last lesson
Life is short

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