Hi there!!!<3
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Cover, Title and Blurb-8 / 10
Grammar and Spelling-7/ 10
Detail-9/ 10
Plot-5/ 5
Originality-5/ 5
Flow of the story-5/ 5
Overall enjoyment-5/ 5
Total-44/ 50
Review- it's a lovely story about the love of 2 brothers for their yet to be born sister, I love the humor in the story, the unexpected ways of showing of love which is mentioned. This story is just loveable! The grammar could have been better, and I am not talking of the hindi words you used, I am talking of the English words which were used incorrectly at different places. Also I will suggest you to put the English translations after the hindi sentences/words you write, it would interest the reader more!
Sorry if I offended you in any ways
Author your story is unique and amazing and you rock!
With best wishes
Azmi<3
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