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Cover, Title and Blurb- 6/ 10
Grammar and Spelling-4/ 10
Detail-10/ 10
Plot-4/ 5
Originality-3/ 5
Flow of the story-3/ 5
Overall enjoyment-3/ 5
Total-33/ 50
Review- I love the mystery each character has in the story, it makes the story very potential. The characters are strong, and its just not any high school story, its different.
Although the language was quite hard to get.. I had to read many parts twice to understand. The language, seems confused, also the point of views changes from third person to any character without any warning! And some sentences are repeated, which are not at all necessary! So it's a red flag in the story. I'll suggest you to try an app called grammarly, it will help you enhance your language!
Author your book is spontaneous!
With best wishes
Azmi<3
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