[23] The Twisted Perfection || @Nayasha_Jena

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Username- @Nayasha_Jena 

Cover, Title and Blurb- 10/ 10

Grammar and Spelling-8/ 10

Detail-10/ 10

Plot-2/ 

Originality-3/ 5

Flow of the story-4/ 5

Overall enjoyment-4/ 5

Total-41/ 50

Review- The first chapter made me sure that I was gonna get hooked to this book! Its amazing! I love the sarcasm and savageness in the language used! I loved the little suspense the author gives at the end of every chapter. But I think that the meeting of the s was too.... Fast is the word, but as the story goes on, I tend to mend with the environment and I am like, yeah this can happen. I loved how the conversations isn't boring but on point and short!

Just little suggestions, the names of the s are just common names.. you see if we read names in books 'Patrick' is the side-guy.. and 'Stephanie' is the jealous girl... idk but it just don't fit in! but you always can be unique and that's just my personal opinion. Also make the paragraphs shorter so that the reader does not gets bored with the story, don't make this amazing story look like a 12th standard science book!

Sorry if I offended you in any ways

Author you rock!

With best wishes

Azmi<3

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