Hi there!!!<3
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Cover, Title and blurb - 10/10
Grammar and Spelling- 9/ 10
Originality- 8/ 10
Writing Style- 9/ 10
Overall Enjoyment- 10/ 10
Total- 46/ 50
Review- honestly totally jealous of your poem its truly amazing and well said. The sudden twists in the poetry interests the reader into reading more. The simple way of writing, is what pleases me as a reader, because the message is roaring from the poem even with simplest words. Just a suggestion, I think that you should give a situation, before starting the poem to the readers, I've noticed you did it in some of them, just don't do it in the end, do it at the starting so that a scene is created in the readers mind.
Sorry if I offend you in any ways
Poet/ Poetess your poetry is beautiful!
With best wishes
Azmi<3
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