[45] Yours Forever || @thatzaynlover

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Hi there!!!<3

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Username-  @thatzaynlover

Cover, Title and Blurb- 5/ 10

Grammar and Spelling-10/ 10

Detail-10/ 10

Plot-5/ 5

Originality-2/ 5

Flow of the story-5/ 5

Overall enjoyment-5/ 5

Total-42/ 50

Review- The story is well written. The character are really well made by the author, the description is intriguing. If the chapters were longer, it would be a plus point to this amazing book. And I LOVED THE NAMES. And the tension created between the 2 characters occasionally is PERFECT. This story has something which attracts the reader into reading more.

Although the cover made it look, like the story is gonna be about a married couple, and that's my opinion, I maybe wrong! But apart from that I think the cover is too simple, for this complex story. The level of complexness of the story and the cover should match. Try a complex cover! Also, I know changing the title won't be the best idea, but... YOURS FOREVER. I have read this title so many times!! Just try changing it to something unique.. it's not bad, but it's better to be original.

Sorry if I offend you in any ways

Author your book is beautiful!

With best wishes

Azmi<3

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