[44] Beyond Denver || @checksmartreaders

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Cover, Title and Blurb- 9/ 10

Grammar and Spelling-7/ 10

Detail-9/ 10

Plot-4/ 5

Originality-3/ 5

Flow of the story-4/ 5

Overall enjoyment-4/ 5

Total-40/ 50

Review-

You know there are so many characters and love interests, that you can't really tell with whom the protagonist will end with, it keeps the reader hooked on to read more. I love the way the chapters are written, and the confusion created within. And its nothing like those stories, where the protagonist gets a job, and the job is a total fairytale.. no! this story has the BEST description of what a job could be like.

Although sometimes the sentences turned out to be a mess. And till chapter 14 you didn't got to the main point of the story, trying to make suspense? Well it turns boring! If that could be fixed it would be a great story!

Sorry if I offend you in any ways

Author your book is amazing!

With best wishes

Azmi<3

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