[8] Manan ff Searching My Star⭐ In Whole Darkness🌑|| @Sharmiteddy25

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Hi there!!!<3

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Username- @Sharmiteddy25

Cover, Title and Blurb9/ 10-

Grammar and Spelling 2/ 10-

Detail 7/ 10-

Plot5/ 5-

Originality2/ 5-

Flow of the story4/ 5-

Overall enjoyment3/ 5-

Total 32/ 50-

Review-  Its a manan fan-fic!! i love Parth Samthaan and i totally ship Manan! The story's plot is amazing, but the grammar and spellings makes it way too hard to able to understand what does the author want to say.... Author just a little suggestion, try apps like Grammarly. Write on that, and it will help you with spellings and grammar!! Other than that, the story is amazing, it has lots of twists and turns and I was really curious after every chapter so curious that I forgot to even like some chapters!

Sorry if I offended you in any ways

With a little bit of work on grammar, Author you'll rock!

With best wishes

Azmi<3

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