Okay, okay, I think I owe you all an apology. I promised the story would be updated in a couple of weeks, and it's been a couple of months. I kept getting distracted and forgetting to actually work on the story. I finally got around to getting back to work on it, and the newest chapter is done. I've also almost finished rewriting and fixing the previous chapters. I'm going to make a list of some of the things I've changed so far. Thank you all for being patient with me!
1. Even I had second hand embarrassment from reading about Kaede's proposal and her craziness, so I've changed it up a bit so it isn't so... cringy. I've also tried to make Kaede a more relatable character and provide some information behind her actions. I've also edited other parts that I didn't like.
2. I fixed some typos and fixed some incorrect grammar.
3. I tried to cut down on the boring filler a bit so the chapters would be a bit more fun to read.
4. I looked for redundant and annoying words and replaced them with alternatives, so you wouldn't be reading the same words over and over again.
5. I added a few more details to certain parts.
6. I made the format, grammar, and a few other things more consistent. For example, you may have noticed that in the beginning of the story, It had no POV and I added spaces in between quotation marks and sentences, where as later in the story I stopped using spaces and wrote in first person. I added a "No POV" to the parts that were told from third person and I got rid of the spaces.
Thank you again for being patient, and I promise that the big update will arrive soon!
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A Garden of Regret /Oumasai/Saiouma Hanahaki AU
FanficJust your local Hanahaki Kokichi X Shuichi story- This is one of my first stories, so I'll probably remake it in the future and try to make it better. I hope you enjoy!
