I am very sorry that i have not been able to send out your review, i feel very bad that you have been waiting a whole two months for one review. Things got really bad with my mum's condition and she was hospitalized, the doctor said she had really weak heart {and said there were chances of her dying}, so i stopped everything and started spending time with her. Once again i am very sorry. Here is your review...
Book: In too Deep
Author: That_Charming_Kid
Genre: Romance and Comedy
COVER
So, starting with the cover... In my opinion the cover wasn't eye catching or alluring. And for your book to be read and seen by many people you need to have an eye catching cover. Remember, that Wattpad is all about eye-catching covers!
TITLE
At first i thought the title was amazing, then I went ahead and typed it in Wattpad and I saw that they were so many other popular books with the same title, I suggest coming up with a different title, something original, that is completely unique and new. If you need help with coming up with some new fresh titles, dm me! I'm free to help!
BLURB
So heading over to the blurb I noticed some very small mistakes, that you could correct:
Original: Bella Ford. Ahh that name alone makes boys swoon and drool literally.
Edited: Bella Ford. The name alone makes boys swoon and literally drool.
Original: Good body
Edited: Killer curves
Original: Bella finds Jordan cheating anddecides
Edited: Bella finds Jordan cheating and decides
CHAPTERS
I really like the beginning of the chapters such as 'Tell me something i dont know' or 'Code blue' but i fell like you could change it to '01 | Tell me something i dont know' and '02 | Code blue'. By adding the chapter numbers it will become really easy for your readers.
OTHERS
One thing i recommend is using paragraphs, the paragraphs used in your story were really long, and many times readers get fed up when they find really long paragraphs and tend to discontinue reading the book, so to avoid that you can try fitting them into small paragraphs to make the story more clear.
I also recommend using more tags in your book. Tags are the main way readers find your story and for the readers to be able to find your book you need more tags. So i suggest using more tags.
OVERALL
Overall, this was an enjoyable read. Good luck with your future works <33
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