Book: We Take it Back
Author: _R-M-Kempnich_
Genre: Young adult, Teen fiction
COVER
As before I'm going to start this review with the cover. You have many amazing covers, for this story with bright and striking colors. I just felt as though something was missing, looking closely at the covers I figured out that even though your covers are vivid and bright they were a bit bland (meaning that it didn't have any pictures). Maybe if you put an illustrated girl on the cover it would strike out more, making it simple but elegant. If you need any help with making your cover you can just take a peek at my Cover Shop, where I have put a suggestion for your book over or you can ask me to make you a new one.
BLURB
Your blurb was intriguing. It immediately hooked me and I wanted to read on to find out what would happen next.
FIRST CHAPTER
Your first chapter is amazing and the description was on point. You portrayed the two characters that appeared in this chapter perfectly. You balanced out the grief and sorrow in a way where it blew my mind. This chapter was definitely unique and had me immedieantly hooked, making me want to read on.
GRAMMAR
I was unable to find even one, your writing was amazing, grammar was incredible and you did an epic job of looking over your work and correcting any mistakes that might have been there
LANGUAGE
You used fascinating language in the chapters. Scenes were detailed. Your descriptions where amazing that even after having read the chapter the images and pictures where still in my mind!
OVERALL
Your work was an extremely successful and exciting piece and a brilliant read. Can't wait to see how the story develops <33. Also your story will me added to one of my reading lists as a platinum read (since this was so good).
To all the other amazing writers who asked for a book review, the reviews will be coming out tomorrow or the day after that, in the order they were asked for. Stay safe.
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