Book: Forget
Author: EricaS2362
Genre: Paranormal
COVER
Okay, so starting with the cover. To be honest I found it a bit bland. The girl in the picture and the writing didn't wrap up into the same bundle and it just felt like that amazing book could have an amazing book title. Remember the only way to attract your readers is with an eye catching cover! I'm sure you will have no problem finding a graphics shop, but my shop is always open for you, just have a look!
TITLE
so the summary had me hooked, I like the way you used and combined the dialogue and the sentences together. One thing you can do is a add a bit more and clarify and explain it a bit more.
PROLOGUE AND CHAPTERS
I love it. Your quick and snappy prologue had me hooked! An amazing prologue usually means an amazing book <33 A bit of advise for the chapters is to make it a bit lengthy.
GRAMMAR
The grammar was amazing, but I do suggest going over it. Such as on chapter 2 the third line, all of it was cramped into one sentence. I suggest shortening it using full stops. Also one more thing is that some of the sentence were too short for example the word step was used in many different lines. This kind of ruined the flow of your amazing story, maybe you could write it together like 'She took another step forwards'. But overall it was great!
OVARALL AND DESCRIPTION
The different words you used were great and kind of gave them amazing suspense and gave it a paranormal effect. Overall i thing it was a successful piece! Continue with the amazing work! <33
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Nebula's Reviews
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