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Book: The gods of yesterday

Author: CynthiaSolatto

Genre: Fantasy


COVER

So starting with the cover, again. To say this in very simple words, your book literally has my heart. I love it. The girl, the bow, the background matches perfectly with your story and is very eye-catching. Just maybe the font could be a bit bigger. 

BLURB

Your blub was amazing not going to lie. Immedieantly hooked me and I wanted to know more about her quest and whether she survived. 

CHAPTER 1 

You set the scene perfectly at the beginning with the hunt and the description was amazing. It was exactly what I like to see in a chapter. You used many metaphors and similes, and described the main characters thoughts, in a way that it all came into balance.

LANGUAGE + GRAMMAR

You did a superb job at portraying the scenes in this book. The scenes had enough description that they became real in my mind. You also did a great job at looking over your work, as I did not find any mistakes or grammar corrections. 

OVERALL

Your piece was incredible and amazing. I loved your idea and the plot of your story. It was interesting to see a map inside the book and I loved the idea. The title beginnings were interesting and kept me guessing what the chapter would be about. Good luck with the continuation of your book and good luck in the contest <33


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