Book: A Murder in Disguise
Author: El_Pa_Ca1601
Genre: Mystery, Thriller
COVER
So I'm going to start with the cover. It was amazing for a mystery and thriller book. The color and text just fit in with your genre, very perfectly and immedieantly hooked me in and I desperately wanted to find out what the book was about.
BLURB
Okay I seriously fell in love with the blurb, it was beautifully written and attracted me the second I read it, but one thing I noticed was that they were a bit to many question at the end. Maybe you could take two out or join them together.
CHAPTER 1
So I seriously loved your beginning chapter, you got right to the point with it and dropped it down really nicely and slowly. You started of with them hiding a body, you created the tension and set the scene perfectly.
WRITING STYLE
I seriously loves your writing style, especially the chapter titles, they got me hyped and I was like 'I'm definitely reading this' even after it was 2 'o' clock in the night yesterday. You book kept me up last night for a long time and it was one of the best mystery books I've read on Wattpad. Your description got better and better as I advanced onwards into the chapters. You did an amazing job with the main character and described her feelings perfectly. Many metaphors and similes were used making your story wonderful.
GRAMMAR
The only mistake I could find, in the chapters was:
Original: Melody was saying while chopping olives on a chopping board.
Edited: Melody said while chopping olives on a chopping board.
OVERALL
Your piece was astonishing as it was astounding, it basically kept me on my toes and i just wanted to know what would happen after. An epic read, an epic mystery and thriller book. Keep up the amazing work in the next chapters and I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. <33 Also your story will go in my reading list as a platinum story.
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