The Magic Swan Awards || [Closed]

𖤐Park Jimin Winners𖤐

Here we are beginning our result declarations with the Park Jimin category..vohoooo!!!

As we all know our mochi is a consistent and a very hardworking soul, always striving to be the best. So, as the host and your wellwisher, I hope you all(those who didn't win) dont get disheartened, or come for the judges and their skills but learn from the reviews we provide you with. Please take this as an inspiration to write more and in a better way so that noone gets to point out mistakes in your precious works.

As for our winners~~ I know you all are excited and trust me, I won't make you wait for long. So lets not waste any time and go meet our winners♡♡

The Third Place goes to...

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Flawed Gem by Mrs_Namnam

Flawed Gem

Judge: HotChocoChipCookie

Title 5/5: Matched the story perfectly.

Cover 5/5: Eye catching, I liked it.

Description 9/10: Very good but I still think you can make it a bit more mysterious.

Grammar and punctuation 13/15: You need to work on your grammar a bit.

Writing style and vocabulary 14/15: Great! The chapters were a bit rushed though.

First impression 9/10: You had a really good start.

Plot 15/15: Loved it.

Emotions 10/10: Great!

Character development 9/10: It was a bit rushed.

Dialogue 5/5: Very good!

Overall 94/100: I believe the only thing you need to work on is your grammar otherwise everything is great! Good luck with your writing :)