The Magic Swan Awards || [Closed]

𖤐 Jung Hoseok Winners 𖤐

The results for our sunshine's category is here!!

You know its an angel if there is "hope" in their name itself. That's Jhope, our sunshine and our strict dance leader. This is man is always smiling (except for when he is scared..lol). But apart from his smiling faceu, I get particularly attracted to a drunk hobi! Like the way he turns serious while questioning his life decisions is a total mood.

But the thing is, hobi doesnt stop even when he knows he is one of the best. He keeps on improving and works hard in silence and this should be taken as a true inspiration in whatever we do in our lives. Keep working to become better cuz there is no such thing as perfection.

On that note, lets go and meet our winners♡♡

The Third Place goes to.....

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Black Mamba by Tenebris_Spell

Your Username: MythicsWriter
Book title: Black Mamba
Participants Username: Tenebris_Spell
Category: Hoseok
Title:5/5
It is very interesting and shows originality
Cover:4/5
It is very good but the text is sometimes hard to read
Description:10/10
The description is really good and creates a lot of interest for potential readers.
Grammar and Punctuation: 12/15
Throughout most of the chapter the grammar was perfect, but in recent chapters, there seems to be a rush and grammar overlooked in places.
Writing Style and Vocabulary:15/15
The writing style and the vocabulary used are really good and make the reader want to continue reading.
First Impression:10/10
I honestly didn’t think I would like the concept but then I kept reading and reading and getting stuck in this world trying to figure out how the plot will move. 
Plot:15/15
The pov makes the plot more interesting and how the focus so far on what is written in on Yoongi and I think that is what makes the story even more interesting because you don’t get much from Hoseok.
Emotions:10/10
This is an emotional rollercoaster of a story and it is wonderful It makes you feel everything. It is really good at making your heartache for characters as well create adrenal rushes to happen to make you one edge. It is really good.
Character Development:6/10
This is the only thing I don’t see much of, but I think it will happen in the story maybe. The characters don’t have any development over time but it seems as though so far not much time has passed in the story and that is probably why.
Dialogues:4/5
Dialogue doesn’t occur as much for me to fully rate this, but what I have seen was really good and clear on who was speaking at times. When unknown characters speak such as I believe it is Hoseok it’s just identified as He or him and it gets confusing.
Total:91/100
Suggested Improvements: My suggested improvements are to carefully edit recent chapters, as well as clarifying dialogues that happen. This story has the potential of being really good.