Author Notes: Changes Made

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The Nintega Guy: So I'm back with continuing this story and while I have been away for so long doing my other stories, I have been taking a look back and forth between this and those that I've been working on. So there are some things that I must state before I continue and I have some news. . . 

There will be a few changes made to this story as to make the plot more consistent as I feel as though I've lately been all over the place making this story. So here they are. . .


*Added Transformation Videos + Replaced Gold Third Screenshots* - Felt as though adding those would be more creative to see how the CPUs transform rather than just have them appear in HDD so suddenly.

*Revamped some dialogue in Chapters 4, 5, 6, and 7* - Some I felt were rather uncreative and I was able to produce more ideas in my mind, so I changed some scenes in both chapters to not make it so. . . in my opinion. . . cheesy.

*Edited Previous Pictures* - Some things about the pictures, I just wanted to change as some may notice that the eyes or design is different so I remastered the pictures only by a smidge.

*Golden Dunk has been renamed to Golden Knuckle* - Honestly, it was a move named after one of Terry Bogard's moves (From the series Fatal Fury), so I thought it would be better considering that (Y/N) is using a fist and not "dunking" his opponents.

*Uzume Tennouboshi has been removed from possible harem candidates* - Plot reasons. That's all I'm saying. Sorry for those who were looking forward to having her in the harem, but that's my decision.

*Nepgear and Uni are now in the Yes section as harem candidates* - I'm able to finally find a definite part in the plot for both of them to make it into the harem later on in the story. IF and Compa are still in the maybe section, but I'll try and see what I can do in the future.

*Removed the extra fact that Vert will like you more in HDD* - While she technically still will, she'll show some affection while you are still in your normal form. I had this in due to her mostly liking hot anime men for some weird reason.


The Nintega Guy: So those are all of the changes that I've made throughout this story that you should know of. They're not big, but they are some stuff that I personally wanted to change. I know this story of mine may seem rather vague, but don't worry. . . once the chapters progress it will all get better and better as next chapter. . . will be a subplot before we transition to Leanbox. Excited now? Yes? No? Well, I don't care. . . I'm just happy to see you reading the story as it will be updated REAL soon.

Neptune: Soon?! Why not now?!

The Nintega Guy: I'm on break, Nep! And I can't rush any of my works even if it takes me a year to get it done. . .

Neptune looks at Nintega as if he was crazy.

The Nintega Guy: Uh. . . Not that it will ever take me a year. . . Still, it will come up soon so have a little patience, will ya?

Neptune: Grrr. . . Patience this, patience that. . . I want to see the new feature now! I'll Nep you up if you don't make the next chapter soon enough. . .

The Nintega Guy: Good grief. . .

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