If you have read this book before June 10th 2021. I have made some changes to the beginning in hopes to sound better and make more sense. If you do see any plot holes please tell me so I can address them. I am trying to get this story finished and edited to the best of my ability with the other books in hopes to publish into a real book.
I would very much love your help.
Please do be nice with your critiquing. This book was started on here in 2014 and was my first so I have grown better in writing over time with my other newer stories but still I know I am not great.
So please if you would like to see this book published than I will listen to what needs to be done to get there.
Thank You all my readers!
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Kidnapped by the Mafia Prince
RomanceFor mature readers does have sex and violence. Pain, betrayal, loss, and love Melanie Renall's is thrown into a world she had never known from the lonely lost one she has lived with here parents for years. Moving around the US as her parents write t...
