•originally, louis was going to rape connor
•if you noticed, there weren't a lot of details. before, it was because they were only focused on each other. after, they couldn't function correctly.
•they were so cute and adorable together so that I was able to exaggerate the effects so that my readers could realize that what they read in fanfics is far from true
•the way harry had shut out everyone was exemplifying foreshadowing and irony for after the incident. because what he thought beforehand was actually how it was afterward and vice versa
•meeting of eleanor and connor was heavy foreshadowing but you didn't think enough of it because it wasn't anything to do with their relationship
•the way they snuck around in the day before was symbolizing that they wouldn't have that later. they weren't allowed in that neighborhood and house, which was saying that they wouldn't have that
•if louis raped her, harry wasn't even going to come back from the park and he would walk in during
•I wrote the rape scene at like 3 in the morning
•when I saw the pic that is attached to 7 days after, it made me really start thinking and I found fouseytube 's rape experiment on YouTube and it drove me to write this
•I was actually planning on having them engaged, but when that didn't happen, I wanted him to propose the day before, but tbh I forgot
•he was in jail for 6 months
•he actually wasn't in a mental hospital in epilogue two, he was in his own apartment and Margo was his conscience.
•Niall is not really playing guitar with 5sos, if you didn't catch that. he's just tagging along ;)
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Fanfiction"next time don't wear those damn shorts." I'm trying to make this as real as I possibly can. this will involve what actually goes on in a rape environment and the circumstances of the events--leading up to and following-- so that this community can...
