I have finished revising this story into a new fic. The title is Queen and I tried to fix the many plot holes and unrealistic things. I've also added in some stuff and the story is longer. I felt that the transition was too abrupt here and tried to smooth it out. If you read this story and liked it, please give the new one a chance. I like it better than this one but it has a very similar plotline- just better writing in my opinion. I'm in no way a self proclaimed great writer and I have plenty of improving to go, but I did want to fix what I could so I would have a story I could be proud of. So please read the rewritten version titled Queen. When and if I get the inspiration, I also have an idea for a sequel. The revision story is a separate story and this one will still be available to read.
Thank you for taking the time to read my story! I appreciate the votes and comments because it makes me feel like my writing is getting somewhere. So thank you and please give the new one a chance!
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Insatiable
FanfictionI can't remember what happened. I don't know what I did. All I know is that for some reason, I am drawn to him and I hate him. All of my friends do. It's kind of our thing.
