Watching Miraculous Ladybug(Discontinued)

IMPORTANT

Hey guys, Author here.

I have an important announcement to make.

I am rewriting watching Miraculous.

I know it's doing good so far but this is not how I wanted the story to go. First I had plot and backstory written but then I realized it didn't tie into the show. It was was to off track and didn't really fit with the shows plot or theme. Second, I hadn't planned out on how I wanted the episodes to go until I was able to finally realize how I should have done it.

Originally, It was supposed to be Marinette getting kidnapped by the new Hawkmoth and Demon Prince and it was then about her story on how to get home. But I fucked it up and didn't like how it had gone down.

I wanted Paris to watch, but writing all that dialogue was hard and just repeating.

Third: Adriens story:
I fucked up Adriens story big time. In the book, Adrien has been getting into fights with Marinette but I never had a good explanation on why. I made Adrien look like a dick and it didn't suit his character.

Forth: Marinette's Trauma:

Writing Trauma is hard. I tried writing it and her future trauma but in the end I just kinda made a really depressed Marinette and that didn't look well or feel right.

Fifth: The timeline:

Oh I FUCKED THAT UP BIG TIME. So in the book Marinette is 19 and Adrien 20. But I had background plot of their past and I screwed up the timeline. It just doesn't make sense and it ruins the story.

Sixth: The Villains:

Yeah...Demon Prince in miraculous?

No...it probably should have been just the new Hawkmoth.

Seventh: The romance:

Um yeah...I had a good romantic backstory on how Marinette fell in love with CN and how Adrien fell in love with Mari. But due to the timeline it's not making the cut and I am sad about that.

Plus there love story went down hill fast and I made CN toxic. He would never harm LB.

Thank you so much for all the support.

Love you ❤️