55. Promise

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Susheela wakes up next morning by knocking on the door 

She slept crying...why ? No idea maybe because of guilt maybe because Pramod didn't trust her enough to tell her everything .... 

She opens the door and sees garima 

S: key hua subha subha...

G: papaji bula rahe h tujhe aur Pramod ji ko baat karna h..

S: mai jati hu...tu Pramod ko dekh le

G  :phir ladai? Kal teri shadi h behen ! 

S: please garima ye hum dono ke beech ki baat h 

Saying that she walks away to see her father 


She sees dp lying down....it was so painful seeing the person who never sat on bedrest 

S: papaji apne bulaya...

D: han baith akke...

Beta sach bata tu khush h na.....maine na galti to na kardi jaldi jaldi teri shadi ka bol ke ? Sagai ho gai h ab....tu bol to shadi baad me kara dunga....teri jindigi bohat baki h 

S: ji...

D: dekh beta ek baat dekhi h maine...Pramod tujhe jaise rakhta h na vaise tujhe kahi na milega....shadi me pyaar se jada bharosa lagta h....wo tum log kya bolte ho...efforts lagte h

She laughs lightly with tears 

D: beta tu shadi kisi se bhi kar pyaar ho na ho...ek wo chah honi chahiye...ki kabhi kuch galat ho jaye to usse sudhar lo ! Dono taraf se- 

Pramod comes in calmly knocking the door 

D: aaiye doctor shab 

He makes them both sit together 

D: abhi iss bailbhuddi ko yehi bol raha tha ki shadi ki jalbaji na h...maine bass isse khush dekhna tha...mujhe pata h wo aap kar lenge to ab mai shanti se mar- 

S: papaji! 

D: han han chal gussa band kar meri baat sun 

He takes both of there hands and keeps Susheela's on Pramod 

D: maine aaj apna kanya ka daan kar diya h bass ab ek wada chahiye h dono se 

P: boliye na dp ji

D: wada karo dono kabhi bhi lad ke nahi soge ! Kuch bhi ho raat ke pahle sab theek kar loge....koi bhi jhagda ek din se lamba na jana chahiye....aur mane pata h tum dono bohat ladte ho...

Par uske baad dono ki ankho me dard rahta h... beta baat karke apna dard bato jaise khushi batte ho.... jindigi ki sari khushi tum dono ki ho jayegi 

Susheela hugs her father crying running short of words 

D: leke jaiye isse doctor shab nahi to aaj ye maine bhi rula degi 

The trio smile looking at each other 

Dp keeps hand on their heads giving his blessing while Susheela walks out with an uneasy feeling what if it was her last heart to heart talk with her father 


Reaching the room they both give each other a small smile....maybe Dharampal was right about them 



Going on a short break cause likhne ka man nhi🥲✌🏼

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