My Version Of Divergent

Chapter 5

Tris POV.

"You guys she's dead" someone yells. I'm I dead did I die there and then.

But there are so many things I wanted to do. I can't be dead.
I'm just stuck in darkness and I can't move or speak but I can hear.

Am I in a coma. wait is this hell did I go here because I transferred to Dauntless. Oh man, this Is worst than burning in hell.

No no, I take that back that would be very very painful.

"She's not dead" I hear someone say. Four I can tell it's him I can recognise his voice which is weird because I only just met him.

"Maybe she fainted," a woman says I think it's Shauna.
"No no, I don't think you can just faint suddenly Well, you can but I don't think she fainted".

"Maybe," someone says "she's paralysed. "Peter what the hell did you do" Four shouts.

To loud. To much. Ahh, my ears can't handle all the shouting plus the screaming that I hear as soon as Peter says Paralyzed.

"Well, maybe I might've put something in her drink to make her temporarily paralyzed.

"Beatrice", I hear Caleb shout. No, no nope nope take me now God, please just take me I can't handle the screaming.

If I hear one more scream I will just freak out. "You insane" I hear many people shout.

I can't handle this. I throw myself up and shout from the top of my lungs.

"I CAN'T HANDLE ALL THIS SCREAMING SO SHUT THE F UP".

Everyone seemed shocked but Four was grinning.
"Beatrice," Caleb says shocked that I shouted.

"In Abnegation girls are humble and peaceful not loud" he scolds.

"Well this isn't Abnegation, is It Caleb? No, it's not This is Dauntless and I'm going to give everyone a karate chop on the throat if you all don't stop screaming.

"I knew you had it in you to turn Dauntless" Four says making me blush hard.

I get up hoping nobody notices that my face is turning red.

"Well if you'll excuse me I have some sleep to catch up on.
                                                                                                  

I wake up to the sound of banging. "What" Christina moans putting the pillow over her head.

"Get up," Four says. It's weird how he can sound so kind while being rude.

"Five more minutes" she moans. He pangs on something again harder making it loud enough to damage someone's eardrums.

Wow, it's everyone's life mission is to make me go deaf.

When I sit up I see a silver spoon in Fours hands a Big pot in the other and his forehead has written on it.

Once I see what it says I shake Christina and point at Four.
After a while, everyone starts laughing well all except Becky.

On Four's forehead, it says.

Date me I'm desperate.

She walks to Four twisting her hair with her finger. "Hi, Four you look good today," she says pushing his shoulder.

"Okay", he says clearly uncomfortable. "Get ready within thirty minutes and change those ridiculous clothes.

I take a quick shower. I'm so glad that girls and boys have separate bathrooms.