Eeveelution Squad Rewritten

Chapter 2, The one I love the least...

A couple days later.

S: "So, why don't you like mons calling you by your name?" V: "I don't know, I just prefer it that way." S: "Um, okay." V: "So, where do you know my brother from?" S: "Well, we met when we were kids." V: "Ooh." S: "And we ran into each other. Literally." She says while giggling. They both just sit together in silence. V: "We gotta get my br-." S: "Yup. We for sure, gotta get them together." V: "So what should we do?" S: "Let's send them on a shopping trip together." V: "Sure." J: "Oh no, what are you two scheming?" V: "Nothing dear brother. We just need you to wait here." J: "Um, ok? Wait, brother?" V: "Be right back!" She says as she runs off. 

A little while later...

G: "Why are you bringing me here?" V: "You'll see." J: "Oh great." They both walk up to Speed. V: "Ok, so we need you two to go get us something." J: "Why us two?" S: "Because. Just go." G: "But do I have to go? Especially with him?" V: "Yes." They both push them out the door. J: "Wait, so what do we even g-?" V and S: "Good luck!" They say as they shut the door and lock it. J: "Ugh, I sometimes hate those two. Anyway, you don't have to go if you don't want to." G: "Might as well, it's not like they're going to let us back in anyway." J: "Uh, if you say so, let's go." He walks off. G: "H-Hey! Wait up!" She runs after him. 

After a bit of walking...

J: "Wait." G: "?" J: "What are we even supposed to get?" G: "Oh, well I guess they never told us." J: "I feel like shopping isn't the point." G: "What do you mean?" J: "I feel like it's more to just have us be next to each other." G: "..." J: "Eh. But I'm probably over thinking it." G: "Y-Yeah. P-Probably." She says with a slight blush. G: 'Ugh, why am I blushing? I just met this guy, and he probably hates me.' (Also, '' text= thoughts, and "" text=speech) J: "So uh... Lazuli right?" G: "Mhm." J: "Ok, so what do we even get?" G: "I don't know. Has Espeon needed anything?" J: "No, I don't think so, do you want anything?" G: "U-Uh, I'm fine." J: "You sure? This would be a perfect opportunity." G: "I said I'm fine!" J: "Ok ok, geez. No need to be angry." G: "S-Sorry." J: "Sorry?" G: "What? Is there something wrong with me saying sorry?" J: "No, not at all. You've just seem pretty... well, cold. Heh." G: "W-Was that a pun?" J: "Maybe." G: "Whatever, I have too many things in my head to care." J: "Like what?"  G: "U-Uh... like... N-None of your business!" He seemed a bit shocked, heh, at the response and decided to keep quiet. G: "He's such an idiot." She mumbles under her breath. J: "What was that?" G: "Um... I.. Uh... Nothing!" J: "Uh, you sure? You're acting a bit weird. Do you feel ok?" G: "Yes I feel ok!" J: "Alright?"

Quite a while later...

S: "I wonder what's taking so long." V: "Did we actually tell them what we wanted?" S: "Well we wanted them to be together." V: "True. They're probably talking or walking back." A knock on the door abruptly appears. S: "Oh! That must be them right now." She runs to the door to open it. It was indeed them empty handed. S: "So, how was your little trip love birds?" J: "It wa-." G: "L-Love birds?!" S: "Mhm. How was it?" G: "I-I'm going to my room." She says as she walks past Silvia and goes to her room. J: "Yeah. What do you mean by that?" S: "Well, soon to be love birds." J: "I think there's something I'm not understanding here." S: "Of course not. You're over-thinking it." J: "Wha...? You make my head hurt, I'm going to my room." He says as he goes to his room. V: "Well, I'll say it went well." S: "Indeed. Tomorrow we'll lock them up somewhere." V: "Eh, that's too quick." V: "Right." Ee: "H-Hello." S: "Oh, hi there." Ee: "Um. Do you know where my daddy is?" S: "Daddy?" Ee: "Oops, I mean... Big brother..." S: "Which one?" Ee: "J-Jolteon." S: "Oh, well he's in his room." Ee: "Okie, thank you!" She says as she runs off. S: "Wonder what she wants from Speedy...?" V: "Well he is her dad." S: "Wait what?" V: "Yeah, I was there when she hatched and Jolteon "adopted" her." S: "Oh. Well that some good information to know, hehe." V: "What are you on about?" S: "Don't mind me~." She gets off the couch and runs off. V: "I wonder what that girl is up to...?" 

Meanwhile in Leafeon's room...

L: "Hm, maybe I sho-." She gets cut off when she hears a knock on her door. L: "Oh. Coming!" She opens the door to see Glaceon. L: "Oh, hi sis. What's up?" G: "C-Can I come in?" L: "Of course." Glaceon walks into the room and onto the bed. Then Leafeon sits next to her. L: "Is something wrong?" G: "Well, uh, yeah. Kind of." L: "Well?" G: "Uh well... I don't want to admit it... But..." L: "It's fine to tell me anything." G: "Well... I have a crush on Jolteon..." L: "Aw, good for you." G: "Yeah that's all fine and dandy... but the reason I bring it up is because, I think he hates me..." L: "Hates you? I doubt that." G: "Really? I mean I've been so rude to him it's understandable why he would hate me." L: "Still I doubt he hates you. Even if he does... Then you can still talk with him and possibly repair your relationship." G: "Hm... You're right. Thank you!" She jumps off the bed and runs off.

Meanwhile at Jolteon's room...

G: "Ok, just knock on the door... And talk to him." She sighs and knocks on the door. J: "Come in." She opens the door while looking down. J: "Oh. It's you. What do you want?" G: "I want to talk..." J: "Ok? Well close the door and we can talk about whatever it is that you want to." She closes the door and walks up to his bed to sit next to him.

Outside the room...

Eevee walks up to the door and is going to knock on it but is interrupted. S: "Hey Eevee!" Ee: "Huh?" Eevee turns to look at Sylveon. Ee: "Yes?" S: "So. Tell me the truth... Is Speed really your dad?" Ee: "H-How did you find out?" S: "Wow. He seems pretty young to have a kid... So. Whose your mommy?" Ee: "I don't have one... Or at least I think so." S: "Wait. So you don't know who gave birth to you?" Ee: "No." S: "Have you asked Jolteon?" Ee: "Well he's the only one who adopted me." S: "Oh. So he adopted you?" Ee: "Aye." S: "Oh. Well that makes more sense. Alright then, come with me." Ee: "Why?" S: "Don't ask just come." Sylveon walks up and Eevee follows warily. 

Meanwhile...

J: "Alright. Well, spit it out." G: "Ok... I think we've gotten off on the wrong foot." J: "I suppose so." G: "So um... What do I say now?" J: "Maybe try saying what you did wrong and apologizing." G: "Um... Ok... Well I was being quite rude..." J: "Uh huh." G: "And I shouldn't of irritated you." J: "So?" G: "I'm... sorry." J: "Ok. I forgive you. There, are we done here?" G: "Well... I wanted to ask you something..." J: "And that is?" G: "Well uh... I wanted to ask if... If... You would..." J: "?" G: "I... uh... Nevermind! See you later!" She says blushing as she runs off. J: "Man. That girl is weird."

Meanwhile in the living room...

S: "So... You want to be closer to your dad?" Ee: "Aye..." S: "Hm... Well I can help with that." Ee: "R-Really?" S: "Of course!" Ee: "Thank you!" S: "Don't thank me yet, I haven't done anything."

Later...

Ee: "So all I have to do is use this move? And daddy will love me more?" S: "Mhm, you saw how it worked on Flareon. Ee: "I guess..." S: "Alright! Now go get em!" Ee: "Oh, um... Okay!" Eevee gets off the couch and runs off. Sylveon laughs. S: "Let's see how well that works out..."

At Jolteon's room...
Jolteon hears a knock at his door. J: "You can come in." Sunshine opens to door and walks in. J: "Hm? Sunshine what's u-?" He gets cut off by Eevee kissing him on the cheek. J: "Um, Eevee?" Ee: "I-I'm sorry daddy, Sylveon said you would love me more if I did this." J: "Aw, Sunshine. I will always love you the most." Ee: "Yay!"

Alright! Chapter 2 done! This took a lot less time than Chapter 1. I guess that is due to me more understanding the direction of the story and also since the chapter itself is shorter. Anyway, I'm going to try to finish Chapter 3 before the end of August which is seeming more and more likely, and maybe even more chapters. Until next time!