Eeveelution Squad Rewritten

Chapter 1, Family and not so friends...

                                                   A little bit of walking later...

There are three Eeveelutions stacked on top of each other, from a Jolteon, to a Vaporeon, to a Flareon from down to up. V: "How much more walking are we going to do?" J: "I don't know, Flare seems to like it, so it's most likely up to when he wants to stop." V: "But this is soooo boring." J: "Well, you can't always get what you want." She pouts. V: "Oh! What's that?" She points to a tree. J: "The tree?" V: "Yeah!" J: "What about it?" V: "I don't know... But it's less boring then this!" She says as she jumps off his back; causing Flareon to fall backwards and hit the ground. J: "Flare! Are you ok?" F: "I guess." He turns back to Vaporeon and walks to the tree. J: "Look what you did!" V: "Well I don't really care, I just want to see what's inside." She jumps into the hole. J: "Hey! Be careful!" V: "Geez, you don't have to be so... protective..." J: "What happened? Are you ok?" He jumps in followed by Flareon. V: "I'm fine, but there's an egg in here." They all walk up with Flareon and Vaporeon hiding behind him. J: "Hm, I wonder what it is doing all by itself..." He taps on the egg. V: "What are you doing?" J: "I don't know. I've never even seen an egg in person." The egg starts to crack. All three: "..." J: "Did I break it?" V: "I don't know, did you?!" The egg starts to glow, and in response all three cover their eyes. Out comes a little Eevee. Ee: "W-Who are you?" J: "Well, uh, we were just walking by and we saw you in here." Ee: "Oh..." V: "So would you like to come along with us?" J: "Really Vaporeon?" V: "What?" Ee: "I-I guess. I don't really have any where else to go." V: "Great! So what is your name?" J: "She doesn't have one." V: "Oh right, you should give her one! You're good with names, right?" J: "I suppose. Say little Eevee, you wouldn't happen to have a name in mind, right?" Ee: "No." J: "Hm, ok then. Well since your egg shined bright before you hatched... I'll call you Sunshine!" (Look, I don't know) Ee: "Ok, I like that name!" J: "Great!" V: "So... What do we refer to her as? She's not your kid, and we're also not related." Ee: "C-Can you adopt me?" J: "Sure. I'm sure that no one will ever think this is weird at all." V: "Foreshadowinggg..." J: "What?" V: "Nothing." J: "So Sunshine, let's get you back to our house so you can get situated there." Ee: "Ok daddy!" J: "Don't... call me that in public." Ee: "Okie."

After they all arrive back to the house...

J: "So. How you like the house?" Ee: "Well, since I've never seen a house before, I guess this one's nice." V: "Yeah, but us, and the rest of the eeveelutions are going to move into a big house, where we're all going to live together!" Ee: "Ooh." J: "Ah, speaking of which, I need to tell Espeon that we're going to bring an Eevee. In the mean time, Vaporeon." V: "Yes?" J: "Take Sunshine and Flare for a walk." V: "Ok." He then walks outside J: "Wow, I wonder when they made this road. I don't remember it being here" ?: "Get out of the way!" J: "Woah!" He says as he just gets out of the way in time. ?: "Sorry!" The Glaceon shouts as it runs by. J: "Geez, I didn't know Glaceons were Jolteons now." He rolls his eyes and starts to walk to the house, conveniently in the same path as the Glaceon.

After reaching the house...

Jolteon knocks on the door. Soon after Espeon enters the door. Es: "Ah. Speed. Wait, where's your siblings?" J: "Well, we're not ready yet, but I needed to ask you something." Es: "Alright, well come in." J: "Alright, thank you." Pearl moves out of the way of the door way and Speed walks in. Es: "So, what did you want to ask?" J: "Well, it's a bit of a weird story, but basically we have a new "addition" to our family." Es: "Is it an eeveelution? Bec- Wait, what do you mean "addition?"" J: "Well, we have a new sister..." Es: "Oh, so it's a girl. Anyway, is it an Eeveelution?" J: "No, it's an Eevee." Es: "Oh, ok. Great! She can live here, I think we have an empty room." J: "She'll probably be around us." Es: "Alrighty then." J: "Cool, we'll probably be moving in a couple of weeks." Es: "So long?" J: "We got things to do. Besides, you've barely even moved in." Es: "I guess, see you then." J: "Bye." He says as he walks back home.

A few weeks later... (About 2 or 3 if your curious)

J: "Alright, is everymon ready?" V: "Yup!" F: "Yup!" Ee: "Aye!" J: "Ok then, let's go!" They all exit out the house and start walking. While looking back, J: "So, are you all excited to move in to the new house?" V: "You bet!" F: "Wait, why are we doing this again?" J: "Well, apparently Espy reached out to multiple eeveelutions of different kinds so they can all live together." V: "So why did you decide to move it as well?" J: "Well, would you rather live in a raggedy older home, or a bigger, nicer, home?" F: "I suppose the ladder." J: "Exactly. But speaking of which, I need you all to be on your best behavior. Well, at least when we're all first meeting each other." Ee: "Why does it matter?" J: "Well, if you behave bad, then that shines a light on me, being the older brother and all." V: "Couple hours." J: "Still." F: "Ok, well how many eeveelutions are going to be there?" J: "Well, Espy said that all the eeveelutions aside from maybe Sylveon. But she's not sure, and now we're bring Sunshine so it'll be around 9 pokemon." F: "9-9 pokemon?" V: "Ooh, maybe you'll find someone who likes you~?" F: "S-Sis!" Flare says while blushing a bit. Ee: "How much longer?" J: "Uh, about 5 minutes or so." V: "5 minutes?! That's like forever!" She says whining. J: "Well, would you like to walk all the way back and I tell Espeon we're not longer moving in?" V: "no..." J: "That's what I thought." He says as he looks back forward. F: "Pfft." V: "Shut it."

A few minutes later...

V: "Finally! Woah. It's so big!' Jolteon snickers and smirks as he looks away. V: "What are you. Two?" She looks at Sunshine. V: "No offense." Ee: "None taken." J: "Sorry, I'm just going to knock now." After saying that, he knocks. After a bit of waiting Pearl opens the door. Es: "Ah, welcome, come in." J: "Thank you. Wait, before I forget let me introduce you to my family." Es: "Alright." J: So, this is my sister Vaporeon." V: "Hello." Es: "Hello, wait, is her name Vaporeon?" J: "No, but she prefers being called that.' Es: "Oh, ok then." J: "Next is Solarflare my brother.' F: "Nice to meet you." Es: "Likewise." J: "And this is my daughter Sunshine." Es: "Oh, pleased to meet y-. Wait, daughter?" She glares at him with narrow eyes. J: "Um... adopted daughter." Es: "Oh well, I'm glad she's a new addition to our family." Sunshine smiles and wags her tail. J: "Indeed." Es: "And you may or may not know my name, I'm Pearl. Anyway, enough with the chit-chat, come on in and you can talk with the others." They all walk in. They spot three other eeveelutions. A Glaceon, Leafeon, and Umbreon. Es: "Not everyone has arrived but most of them are here." J: "Alright." Es: "Alright all of you, there are a couple of more pokemon who have arrived, go introduce yourselves to each other." J: "Alright, well nice to me-." He stops as he stops a very familiar looking Glaceon. F: "Big bro? Are you alright?" Lazuli looks over. G: "What are you staring a-?" They lock eyes. She jumps up and he steps forward. G and J: "You!" J: "What the heck?! You could of hurt me you know that?!" G: "Well I told you to move out the way didn't I?" J: "Is that how you apologize?! You're a...!" He grunts and sits down not trying to escalate anything. She does the same. L: "...? Sis? What was that about?" G: "Well that idiot almost got hit because he can't pay attention." J: "Ooh, you're really testing my patience you know that?" G: "Mhm, and what are you gonna do about it?" He stands up and starts to walk over to her, but... Es: "Ahem. I don't think we treat our friends that way." J: "Hmph." He says while sitting down again. G: "Eek! He's scary." She says with sarcasm. Es: "Glaceon! Enough!" She rolls her eyes. F: "What was that about?" V: "I don't know..." Es: "Ok, since tensions seem a little high, why don't we all get to know each other?" G: "As long as he doesn't-." Leafeon covers her mouth. L: "Sure." Es: "Ok, I'll start, my name is Pearl." U: "Black." L: "Leaf." G: "Lazuli." J: "Speed." G: "Pfft." J: "Now lapiz lazuli, why don't you zip it before I make you into a mineral?" Feeling a bit threatened she stays silent. F: "U-Uh, Solarflare." V: "..." J: "It's okay if you do-." V: "Crystal." Ee: "Sunshine!" L: "Aw, such a cute name." Ee: "Aye!" Es: "Ok, so are we okay now?" J: "As long as Ms.Sassy pants is okay I am." Leafeon snickers a bit. G: "Really sis?" L: "Sorry." G: "Yeah sure... Whatever." Es: "Cool." Just then a knock is heard on the door. Es: "Oh, that must be the last mon!" She opens the door and in comes Sylveon. S: "Hi ya'll! I'm Silvia the Sylveon!" J: "Wait... Oh no..." He says with fear in his eyes. Es: "Um, anyway, this is Silvia, let me introduce you to everyone else." S: "Okie." Es: "So, we have Solarflare, Crystal, Sunshine, Speed, Le-." S: "Wait. Speed?!" Es: "Yes? That is his na-." S: "Speedy!" She says while running toward him. J: "Oh shi-." She then jumps on him knocking him over on the couch and cuddles with him. Es: "Um... Leaf, Lazuli, and Black." She pears up for a second. S: "Oh, Hi." Then she continues to hug him as he sits up. Es: "Uh, well. I guess they know each other. S: "I thought I would never see you again!" J: "I wish that was true..." V: "Oh. Well you didn't tell me you had a girlfriend." J: "I, well, don't." V: "So why is she cuddling with you?" J: "We, well... Go back." S: "Ahh. The good old days." J: "Sure." Lazuli crosses her arms and looks away. L: "Hm? What's wrong sis?" G: "Nothing... Nothing's wrong." L: "Uh. Okay?" Es: "Anyway, you all know where your rooms are. You are welcome to hang out here or start unpacking." Speed pushes Silvia off him and start to walk to his room with his bag. S: "Awe." Everyone else aside from Crystal and Silvia do the same. V: "So, you seem cool. Wanna hang out?" S: "Sure! Let me just unpack first." They both go to their rooms and unpack and come back to the living room.


Wow, that took longer than I wanted it to. I'm going to try to finish Chapter 2 and 3 during august but then again I can't promise anything. Also, this is straying further from the original storyline then what I was anticipating, so I might try to drift back into it, or do it from here. I don't know. Anyways, until next time!