Amarah's Body

One Creepy Night

Ok, so this is a story i wrote when I was in forth grade and it is REALLY lame. But....a new and awesoner story is coming out of it! i was reading through it and had a revelation haha. so, as soon as i'm done with the story I am currently working on (The Supernatural) i will start posting this new story. The original essay i wrote will be posted here untill I start writing the new and improved version. Then the original will be at the beginning of that story. If any of you have a better title for this please tell be because the one i wrote when i was nine is REALLY lame. so, tell me what you think and please no rude comments saying 'this is lame' or  'i hate this' or anything like that because i already know, this is simply for you to get an idea, sort of, of what the future story will be about so....here is the original. The Following chapters after this are the new story

One Creepy Night

I warily crept up the old creepy steps towards the front door. Suddenly the door started to slowly open. The house was completely dark except fro a small fickering caldle sitting on a large trunk covered in cobwebs. Suddenly a high-pitched scream came from somewhere upstairs! I slowly entered the house and then the door slammed shut BAM! I saw pictures on teh wall of old people and when i moved the pictures turned into ghosts! I saw some old statues staring straight at me. Suddenly I heard the scream again. I moved towards the trunk and it sowly opened! To my suprise it was empty. I looked in a nearby mirror and I saw some creature coming towards me! I looked pver my shoulder I saw nothing. I again heard the scream. I slowly walked up the rickety stairs. When I got to the top of the stairs I saw a door. I opened it and heard a BOOM of thunder then I saw an old body laying on teh floor. I thought it was dead. I looked out of a window and saw the back of the house, it had a trap door right next to a graveyard. Then I thought a graveyard and what that might mean if the ouse was haunted! I heard the scream again and I looked in the direction it came from it was much louder than before. I saw a pair of yellow eyes in a closet. Then I realized I was surrounded by bodies, all moldy and slimy. They all started towards me. I found an ax on the wall and started swinging it, hitting and thrashing them. Then I made my way through the crowd and came to another door, and saw the creature that u had seen in the mirror. It turned out to be a wearwolf! I then knew where the screaming had come from. It was from the wearwolf!! It was drooling and then everything went black. Some people wonder why I never came out of the house. Other people also went into the house and never came out. In the room at the top of the house no one saw that old body, they now saw mine!!!

Yeah...so ok, that was the original story i wrote in forth grade. I know its bad and it sucks but something greater os coming out of it. You just wait and see!!! :)))))