Writer's Note

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First of all, thank you for clicking on this Fanfiction its actually my first Fanfiction so if you have Tipps comments don't spare them I'm open to criticism. I must add I'm not a native English speaker so there could be some spelling, Errors.

I watched XY and XYZ again and somethings really grind my gears so I will rewrite the story and try to make it better.

I will change somethings to the XYZ Story:

First, Ash, Clement and Serena are not 10 but more like 13 or 14. I think the Age didn't make sense in the Anime because we saw the most mature Ash of all seasons and he was still 10 like what the hell. Also, it's hard to write an amour shipping story with preteens so let's change that.

The second change is that Serena have won against Aria and became Kalos Queen, so she won't go to Hoenn at the end of the Kalos saga.

Right now, we are at the Kalos League final, where Ash is in a Battle against Alain. Like in the Anime all Pokémon of both trainers are defeated accept from Greninja (Ash-Form) and Charizard (Mega X-Form).


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