Chapter 36- Darkness

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As Alfie sets me up an account for YouTube, I think about how many subscribers it will get. 100 subscribers. Or even 1000 subscribers. I start to get a cold shiver down my spine. As it goes down it tickles it. My arms get goose bumps. I look around and no windows were open. What's happening. Something's going to happen. But what?

My head fills up with words. Memories. Bad ones... I look around again and see nothing. Everything was duplicated. I stare at Alfie and take a deep breath in.

"LIZZIE!" I can only faintly hear Alfie shouting. Suddenly, its darkness....

I don't know if you realised, but I tried to make the chapters more engaging and stuff. And more descriptive. As my first chapter has almost got 200 views on it! It had loads of discription in. So I thought Ill make the book more fun. Anyway, I quickly wrote this because I also wanted to include that this has got 3000 views!! I can't believe it. Your reading all my bad and horrible grammer! Wow! Enjoy the story :) I also forgot to add, I will be making the other chapters more better in a way. Maybe put all the notes together. So there may be a few changes to the previous chapters.

OK so this is really quick and I've only just added it on. But this book has reached 200 votes!!! Wow! That's a lot so I would like to thank everyone who has voted :) It means a lot :)

~Sophie

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