Okay most of you should have noticed that this books quality is severely lacking, 70% of the chapter's can just be considered filler after chapter three.
I have been increasingly feeling this book is getting worse and worse with the plot, everything was effectively scrapped together after chapter three.
I kinda want to do the robbery scene with Ruby, that way she has an actual reason to be in Beacon. Even though Ozpin sent her a invitation to Beacon in this book, I did jack shit with him trying to train Ruby or even appearing after that chapter only once.
The book had such a intense and dark beginning that got lost after it went on, the biggest mistake I believe I made was getting rid of Ruby's overheating problem.
I dumbed down immensely how much it hurt Ruby to use her abilities when it should be pretty much just her dying over and over again. Shin Godzilla in the movie is in so much pain that it's like he had been stabbed by the river Styx, the river of endless torment and broken promises.
Why did I ever decided to get rid of something so beautifully dark for my book?! Before I even think on making a rewrite for this, I want yalls opinion on if I should do it.
I believe I made The Depth's Of Insanity rework so much better in quality, I know I can make a better rewrite for this book too.
All I need is yall opinion.
Yes?
Or
No?
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The God Of Evolution: Godzilla Ruby Rose X RWBY Harem
Fanfiction*This book has been Rewritten! The rewrite is called The God Of Agony And Evolution* Ruby Rose had been training on a uninhabited island north of the island of patch, unknown to her the site was now testing grounds for Atlas new destructive weapon. ...
