Okay so I didn't know this but when you underline something before publishing the chapter, when it publishes the chapter the underlining disappears and I had Kaijuspeak italic and underlined which sucks.
Also the romance is going to be slow in this book, currently this is the Weiss arc and next will Blake or Velvet haven't decided which one's first, the final arc is going to introduce Neo into the fold.
Also have the character relationships felt organic to you guys? I personally don't like the stories where it's love at first sight and there's no building the basic relationship first, all true love should at first be formed from friendship in my opinion.
So I'm wondering if you guys feel everything is natural romance wise in this story? Let me know what you think!
Also I might split this book into a trilogy with this as the first, the book where everything is semi decent in the tone/happiness of character's, the later ones will be a lot darker/heavier depending on who I choose the villain's to be.
It isn't set in stone on whether the split will happen and each book will have a epic final battle with many death's in them if I choose to do so.
I got the upcoming big battle for this book semi planned out already if I do the split and it will have a few deaths as well :}, I can already hear the delectable tears falling from those scenes I have planned.
Bold: Important note to the story
Italic: Important message to a specific character or event
"Message" Kaijuspeak
"Message" Speech
'Message' Thought's
|Boom!| Noise/sound effect
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Screams of terror filled the air as harsh lightning struck the land in bursts of yellow light, the terror and agony filled howls came from a small village that was aflame in the dead of the night, people were running for their lives as loud terrifying cries shook the air around them.
A/N: Skip to 1:05-1:16 and I still find these roars absolutely horrific!
"SOMEONE HELP US FOR OUM'S SAKE!" A woman screamed as she carried her just months old daughter in her arms while running, the woman shrieked as she saw a giant mouth dive towards her before it ate her alive.
The world around the village was aflame by the yellow lightning hitting everyone around a towering beast that was massive in size, the beast stood at 145 meters tall or 435 feet in height and shook the land with every step it took. The beast was colored a cool gold and had bright crimson colored eyes that shone darkly in the night, it eyes held unmistakable glee and dark malice in them as the tiny creatures ran from it in fear.
It had three long heads that was dragon-like in appearance and two long's tails came from it's back, two towering wing's came out from the sides of the beast as it walked on land, it tails swiping every building in the village and destroying many lives as well.
The golden beast used it's internal energy to start making it's lightning storm even more potent, yellow lightning scorched the land with every flash and rumble of thunder, lightning struck the beast as well with the beast being wreathed in lightning like a golden divine death.
Everything living for miles was hit by the lightning that shook the land, human, faunas, or Grimm mattered little as everything perished.
Ruby Rose was shaking in her sleep as she got visions of her newborn rival, the Crimson orbs of sheer hatred and malice burned into her mind, the world shook as the beast gave one last terror inducing roar and Ruby woke up in a cold sweat.
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