The flight of a flame

Chapter 1 Part 3

To those 2 people

Thank you for reading my book when there was 1 page published, it means a lot to me, and to anyone else who managed through my book to here, please give me feedback and I'll try and improve my book.

I've noticed that I often use the character's name every time I mention them, so I'll attempt to change that.

Just so the few of you know, Woolworths or woolies is an Australian grocery store.

The air grew tense as Eva walked through the back doors into her scanning slot. As she did, some of the heavy lines drained into hers. A few people came, had their things scanned, noted on her young appearance and left. The 13 year old would say thank you, come back soon. Some how, she didn't get yelled at once by her boss. There was a little kid who wanted a chocolate bar, and started whining, that was almost sure to get the attention of the big mop of Sharon, and her pineapple under the sea hairdo.

Half way through her job, she noticed that todays payment in itself would be enough to buy a small phone. Through her time someone even complemented her eyes, being one of somehow very few to find she has heterochromia. Her Amber eye shining as she thanked him.

The sun's power had grown as soon as she started her walk home. "Fawks, what do you think of me getting a phone?"

"So you can play games? Not likely. Not likely at all."

"I'm still gonna get one, your just being mean."

Well into 3:00, Eva came back with an iPhone 6, a fast charger, an iPhone 6 phone case and a tub of mixed nuts. "Got some mixed nuts, gonna put them in the fridge." She called, knowing she might just get a haircut. Instead she got whacked with a wing and the mixed nuts were gone.