In Love With You (Diluc X Reader)

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Hi anyone here who was hoping for an update.

Ive decided to rewrite this book!!

Ive been rereading and i couldnt read with a straight face . Id cringe most of the time and it was just really messy.

It felt like the plot was somewhat choppy? And im pretty sure i kinda forgot kaeya and some other random guys got kidnapped. Ive also said that you would gwt to choose your vision, but i didnt stay true to my word because i forgot.

However, now that im rewriting it i will try make the grammar better and the plot make more sense since i have the actual like idea of what i want it to be in my notes.

This time youll actuakly get to choosw your vision, but ill have to make a separate xhapter for each vision so it might take a while, please bear with me.

So far one chapter of the rewritten version will be up, please look at my account, it should be called "my significant bother" 🤭 and pelase criticize me in the comments if you can, i think for me personally its very important to be able to grow. Since im not that old,and im my first language isnt english, im not very great at creative writing. Any sort of criticism will be appreciated.

Have a good day!!