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♠Title
♠Cover
♠Blurb
♠Grammar
♠Point of view execution
♠Story pacing
♠Writing style
♠Punctuation
♠ Character introduction
It also contains comments and ways the writer can better their work. If the review makes you want to read the book, go right ahead.
Title: Senior year series book 2: Ultio’s List
Genre: High School Mystery
Writer: korisa_hex
Review
Book Title: The book title. Well, the book title is just okay. I guess it sparks just enough curiosity in the mind of anyone who comes across it. So, yeah. Fair enough.
Blurb: I already read the first book in the series. So, for a stand-alone sequel, the blurb is just okay. But then, based on what I garnerd from the rest of my team, the blurb only has a 'READ ME' effect. Doesn't do much to hold a reader in. But then, it's fair. So, it's okay.
Book Cover: The book cover is sorta below average and I don't really see how it relates to the title, the genre of the story and the story itself. For a high school murder mystery, it needs a whole lot more. I suggest creating a cover that shows "Murder Mystery" on it. Because it looks like an ordinary teen fiction. Telling us the story of a girl. And that's not even it. You dig?
Grammar: Grammar was actually pretty okay. I only spotted a few errors with it and maybe a little inconsistency with tense here and there. And um, yeah. Grammar, apart from those little things, was really good.
POV Execution: I'd say it was perfect. I liked it. Carried the reader along. There was no confusion anywhere. Good work.
Story Pacing: It was good too. The pacing was just right. Not too fast or too slow. Wonderful.
Character Introduction: For me, this was done wonderfully. Really. Keep up the good work.
Writing Style: Your writing style is simple — I think I already mentioned it before. And yeah, a little more descriptions will help. So, yeah. Don't get me wrong, simple is pretty. But it's prettier when it's spicy.
Punctuation: Based on what I read, I don't think I spotted any punctuation errors. It was all good. Except maybe little inconsistency with the dialogue punctuation. Apart from that, it was okay.
Overall, I enjoyed reading the first five chapters of your story. And again, I think you're a talented writer who has so much more to give to the world. Keep going!❤️
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