21. Concert

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ALIA'S PROV

'Arrgh why can't I find a suitable plot'

I held my hair in frustration and closed my eyes.

'focus Alia focus'

I took a deep breath and looked at my laptop after opening my eyes.

'How should I make my main leads meet for the first time?hmm'

I tried to think but at last decided to call my collaborator for this book. I Searched for my phone and found it under the pillow.

'Under the pillow? Hein?'

'What was she doing there?'

'How r u this sure that your phone is she?' my mind ask

Because I know she is she and now you shut up. I rolled my eyes and searched for her number in the contact list.

I dialed her number and waited for her to pick the call, as I held it against my left ear.

"Ji ji Kasak Saibah ko humari yaad kaise aai" I rolled my eyes at her choice of word that she used to call me.

(So what makes kasak madam remember me)

"Please Suman"

"What please Suman? I just stated the fact" she said in a bored tone.

Saying this she laughed.

"Okay okay now tell me why you called?" She asked after her laughing session.

"I'm not able to think of a new plot like how we should make our main lead characters meet for the first time but u know it should be different" I asked

"Hmm let me think" she said in a serious voice as if she started thinking.

'she did started thinking Alia'

'uh huh okayss'

"Idea.!!" She exclaimed.

"God woman can you just lower your volume a little for my ear's sake" I said keeping the phone away from my ears.

"Yeah yeah sorry hehe" she giggled at last and I rolled my eyes at this.

"Tell me the idea now will you?" I asked.

"Yeah so you we should make them meet in a jungle in a stormy night. Their cars will get punchered there and then they will colloid to each other while searching for a way"

"Yeah so tell how's the story?"

"You liked it nn"

"I knew it I'm just awesome "

"Aaaa myyy myy Suman you did it "

"Yesshhh!"

"SUMAN" I yelled at last to stop her blibickering.

"This is just an another Bollywood type yr"I said with a whince.

"Toh!?" She said in a duh! Tone.

(So!?)

"You don't know nowadays readers don't like it that much and somewhere it makes it cringe babe"  I tried to explain her my point of view.

It's not l didn't like her idea it's just isn't matching according to my characters and I think my readers will not be interested in that way much.

"Then what Iya ? You have something in your mind?" She asked.

I sighed and said

"Hmm give me sometime I'll think about it and will contact you and till the time you do the same"

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