flashback to last chapter:
"ok so at the moment it looks as if fin is going to be banished whatever the vote, however, their are about 15 people left to vote, however you do not HAVE to vote, but it is very highly suggested, finally, raise your hands up if you think newt and fin should get banished together" alby said, stuttering his words
*13 people raise their hands*
"ok, i guess thats settled then...banishment is at noon 5 minutes before the sun sets, and the doors shut for the night, council session closed, someone go get newt and put him in the pit, along with fin, who is already in there, no further discussion" he said and then walked away, not looking at anyone
no way is this happening right now
*two of the slicers stand up and walk towards the door, most likely to go and get newt*
i have to change albys, mind, he can't do this, its newt, something weird is going on in his mind.
a/n i still have no idea what even went down last chapter, but yea....i went there... newts getting banished...stupid lil gally messing everything up gahhh
chapter 14- Banishment
MADDIES P.O.V
""darkness.
that all I've seen in what seems like forever.
just darkness.
if i have to go like this one more second i honestly don't know what ill do, not that i can do anything
"HELPPPPP!!!" i try to scream but my voice is hurting so bad from screaming non stop for so long, all the time, nonstop, forever
i guess its just not gonna work, no ones there.
no ones ever there, no ones gonna save me
i can't move, somethings paralysed me to the floor, it hurts, but at least i can feel some sort of feeling, I'm not alone, i know that, hopefully someone will save me.
But for now, ill stay here, rotting away, well if this is even real life...""
and then something happened....
NEWTS P.O.V
she keeps screaming, over and over and i can't take it anymore, i need her to wake up, i need her, she's not dead, she's alive.
why is she screaming?
why.
why can't she just wake up!
*2 slicers walk into the room and walk towards newt, grabbing his arms*
"HEY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING, GET OFF ME!" i say, not that i can stop them, i can barely move, I'm way too weak to fight the slicers.
"newt please, we didn't wanna do this, just make it easy on us" one of them says, he sounds so guilty
i rake my brain, "what have i done?" i say, my voice fading, a tear appears
"DONT TALK, STOP RESISTING US, NOW MOVE IT!" the other says with anger, i look up, to no surprise i see a familiar face.
"gally? why, what did i ever do to deserve this?"
"JUST SHUT UP AND MOVE IT!" he says
*gally twists newts arm then shoves it onto the floor, with a lot of power gally stands on newts twisted arm with full force*
"AHHHHHH" i cry, im in so much pain i just give up, lets my emotions take over"
*newt is now sobbing over the pain and all thats happening*
with the last bit of strength i have left in me, i whisper "i need you back maddie, i need you, please, maddie, help me" and then my body falls to the floor, I'm still breathing, eyes open slightly, but i can't move, I'm about to give in, give up...
MADDIES P.O.V
im so weak, i don't know how much longer i can take this, not that i can do anything to stop it.
1 final scream
"A..."
i started to scream, then i heard something, someone, someone else, they were screaming also, but they sounded terrified
all i heard was
"HEY! WHAT..... OFF ME!"
i missed the middle part, but this didn't sound too far away
i waited, maybe i can hear more if i wait
"STOP RESISTING!" was the next thing i heard
it all went silent.
*a crunch made maddies body shrivel in horror*
what was that?
i unloosen all my muscles as I'm really tight right now
i wait once again, maybe one more sign before i shout back, scream, try and move/ do something
"i need you back maddie, i need you, please, maddie, help me"
me? who's knows my name? .....
it can't be...
it just can't.... no way on earth...
maybe...?
"newt?" "i need you too..."
everything goes white... I'm seeing something, colour... colour! I'm seeing colour!
reds, greens, blues, whites, purples, all the colours you can think of fill the room and objects seem to appear, chairs, tables, beds, where am i?
a hospital bed?
i look to my right, and see a familiar face, they seem lifeless, but there eyes are open, i try to move, but I'm too weak, my body won't let me,
"newt"
end of chapter
A/N
BAMMMMMMM NEW CHAPTER!!!! YAHASSS M8 I ACTUALLY ACCOMPLISHED SOMETHING IN LIFE PEOPLE!
*rounds of applause*
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i hate myself!
IM SO SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING IN SO LONG! SO SO SO SORRY!
but as I'm ill i thought i might as well so here you go!
sorta hate it, sorta like it, idk
(i might change some things that happen in the chapter when maddie first goes into her coma/thing that idk what it is... lol I'm the writer of course i know what I'm doing......)
ill tell you guys it i do end up doing that so ya
please keep commenting i love to hear your feedback!
also thank you soooo much for 1k reads! thats insane! i remember when i had 10 and i celebrated...wow I'm sad... lol don't care cuz I'm weird like that...THANK YOU GUYSSS!!!
1 last thing..... I've changed who maddie is so if you want to you can look at the chapter list thingy. i just think she suits better!
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