I have finished revising the previous parts of the story. Since there are quite a few changes and additions that've been made, I've compiled them into a list. The changes are as follows:
1. Story parts have been cut up into smaller paragraphs, so there's not just a wall of text on the page
2. Story parts have been grammar checked to the best of my ability, so a few word choices here and there are different
3. Proper punctuation has been applied to all dialogue that ended in a period within quotation marks
4. He/she has been used more so that you don't see a character's name every other sentence
5. Missing italics in some text has been added
6. Part three has been completely re-written and is longer now
7. The life support scene in part 4 has been changed
8. The Scolipede scene in part 5 has been changed
9. The antidote scene in part 5 has been cut and replaced with a smaller paragraph
10. The Ariados scene in part 6 has been changed
11. Smaller text/dialogue changes (that I can't think of off the top of my head) have been made across all parts
I'm still writing part 7 (I know I said it would be done a few days ago, but I got caught up with other things), so you can look forward to that. :)
This notice will be removed when part 7 is done.
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Pokémon Dimensions
AdventureA teenage boy named Matthew wakes up in an unfamiliar place and soon realizes he's not quite like himself anymore. He has somehow turned into a Pokémon! Lost and confused, he seeks out help from the first human he comes across, but he doesn't end up...
