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CHAPTER 8:WHATS GOING ON
Fiona was lying in bed, her eyes dark from many sleepless nights, and her tear-stained face bore the weight of countless worries. She knew, deep down, that the police hadn't been trying hard enough to help find her missing sister, Rihanna. It had been days since anyone had seen or heard from her, and Fiona couldn't bear the uncertainty any longer.

Sitting up in bed, she felt her heart race with anxiety. She knew she had to take matters into her own hands. Fiona grabbed her phone, her hands trembling with nervous energy, and dialed her mother's number. Her mother's voice answered, and almost immediately, she began to scream at Fiona, accusing her of being selfish for causing their mother so much worry.

Fiona's emotions reached a breaking point, and she yelled back, telling her mother to stop. In the midst of the heated argument, her mother suddenly fell silent. Seizing the opportunity, Fiona's voice quivered as she asked, "Mum, do you know where Rihanna is?" Tears welled up in her eyes again, and her mother didn't answer for a moment, a heavy silence hanging in the air.

Of course, here's an extended version of the story:

Finally, Fiona's mum, Karol spoke in a tone now filled with concern, replied, "What do you mean, where is she?" Fiona swallowed hard, her voice croaky, as she explained, "She hasn't been home for days... I'm so scared, Mum." Her mother's worry deepened, and she said, "You know what, we are coming down." Fiona felt a mix of relief and gratitude wash over her. It was an emotionally overwhelming moment, and she longed for her family's support in this time of distress.

"Thank you, Mum," Fiona sniffled, although she had her doubts about her mother's involvement. Her heart ached for her missing sister, Rihanna, and she knew they needed all the help they could get to find her.

The family arrived at Fiona's house after three long hours of travel. Once gathered, they sat down to discuss their strategy for locating Rihanna. During the discussion, Rihanna's step-brother, kyle voiced his stupid concerns, suggesting, "She probably ran off for attention, you know what she's like." His father, Mitch and her mother Karol nodded in agreement, echoing their sentiments. The weight of their words hung heavily in the room, leaving Fiona feeling shut down, her regret building with every passing moment. She wished she hadn't reached out for their help, but there was no turning back now.

Eventually, after hours of deliberation, the group made a decision to go out on a search for Rihanna. The atmosphere was tense, and Fiona couldn't shake the feeling that her family's skepticism was undermining her efforts. But deep down, she knew that their combined effort was the best chance to bring her sister home safely.

As they left the house, they unexpectedly crossed paths with Maria, Malikai, and Derek. Mariah stopped dead in her tracks, her face as if she had just seen a ghost. "Hello, sweetheart, it's been a while," Karol greeted Maria with a glare, and Derek pulled her back slightly, whispering, "Who is that?" Malikai, standing nearby, couldn't help but eavesdrop on Maria's response.

Maria, her voice drained of energy, replied, "It's my aunt... Rihanna's mother." Derek was quick to express his concern, "Didn't she abuse Rihanna? What's she doing here, and I assume her stepdad and stepbrother are the two with her?" Maria shot Derek an irritated look, gently cuffing one side of his cheek with her hand. "I think Fiona called them for help," she explained, her eyes reflecting a hint of madness. It was a complicated situation with a troubled family history that had resurfaced in their search for Rihanna.

"Hey, Kyle, why don't you go ahead and join the teens, and we adults will split up," Kyle's father, Mitch, suggested. Kyle jumped into the group, eager to be part of the search although he was filled with jokes, and inappropriate comments effort. Malikai's blood began to boil at the thought of Kyle's involvement, considering what he knew he has done to Rihanna and the underlying tensions in their group.

Derek, ever cautious, warned the group, "You guys be careful. There's been a killer around." He cast an annoyed glance in Kyle's direction, his unease palpable. The two groups separated, each with their own mission and concerns.

Malikai kept a knife hidden in his boot, ready for the moment when Kyle might find himself alone. The search for Rihanna had taken an even more complex turn, as family dynamics and past conflicts mixed with the urgency of finding their missing loved one, and the looming threat of a killer in the area added an extra layer of tension and danger to the unfolding story.

Certainly, I can revise the story without the reference to suicide:

After a while, Malikai stopped and said, "I need to go home for a little bit," avoiding eye contact with anyone. Derek nodded, and Maria smiled, saying, "Yeah, that's fine, just stay safe." Once Malikai left, little did he know that Kyle was following behind him.

When Malikai got to the door of his house, he stopped as the voice behind him spoke, "Nice place you got here," Kyle giggled. Malikai turned, anger flashing in his eyes, and asked, "So which one of you boys is Rihanna hooking up with?" He smirked. Malikai leaped towards him, holding him by the shirt. "Don't you even start; I know what you've done to her," Malikai stared deeply into Kyle's eyes with a threatening look.

Kyle shoved Malikai back, saying, "Yeah? And you know what! Once I find that attention-seeking dog, I'll make sure to do it again." Kyle's laughter turned sinister but came to a sudden stop as he felt a knife pierce through his chest, centimeters away from his heart. Kyle began to choke, and Malikai dragged him inside his house.

"You're going to suffer for what you put her through and apologize for what you've done," Malikai said with an emotionless expression as he dragged him into his basement. Rihanna, who had seen Kyle, widened her eyes and began to shake. She mumbled, but the words were trapped in her throat.

Malikai threw Kyle on the floor and held his head down, stomping on him. "Tell her you're sorry for what you've done to her," Malikai said in an angry tone. Rihanna looked confused, unsure how Malikai knew about her past, but she was too shaken up to think much of it.

Kyle's unresponsiveness caused Malikai to push his foot down on his head more, and Kyle began to beg, "Okay! Okay! I'm sorry! Stop!" His cries were loud and echoed through the basement. Suddenly, Malikai continuously stomped on Kyle's head, causing him to become unconscious and slowly bleed out until he stopped breathing.

Rihanna turned away at the sight, crying. "Malikai... is my mother and stepfather here?" she sobbed. He walked over to her, pulling her into a hug from behind and placed a kiss on her head. "Unfortunately, they are, and they aren't getting away with what they have done either," he said in a sinister tone.

Rihanna brushed Malikai off, saying, "What is wrong with you!? You need to stop hurting people!" This shocked Malikai, and he shoved her into a wall, his anger boiling over. "Why can't you appreciate me!? I'm doing this to protect us! I've taken down so many people for me and you to have a life together, starting with Jayden..." As Malikai mentioned Jayden, Rihanna's heart sank, finally understanding the missing piece of Jayden's Suicide.

Malikai continued to list the people he had harmed, his voice haunting Rihanna's mind. Her heart raced, and she struggled to process the weight of the situation. Malikai gave her a disappointed look as he saw that she wasn't appreciating his work. She shoved him to the ground, and he exited the basement.

Maliki left his house fuming, his anger was so built up and was slowly spilling, he jumped in the car belonging to his dead fathers car and began to drive, once he spotted fiona, karol and mitch, he sped towards the causing a masive accident, karol wasn't breathing, and Mitch had glass that flung into his neck, he was secconds away from dying, and fiona her bones seeming broken in a few places was also bleeding out, also moments away from dying, malikai and fiona locked eye contact as he drove away dumping his car into the forest and rushing back to his house.

Derek and Maria were attracted to the loud noise of the crash that echoed the street and they were led to two lifless bodys and fiona who was moments away from being one herself, marias eyes teared up "What happened!" she cried balling her eyes out, fionna chocked chile attempting to speak "i think. malikai is the killer..." marias face went white and so did dereks, the felt they were unable to breathe hearing this news, maria cuddled up beside fion hugging her tightly until she took her last breath.

CHAPTER 8 END

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